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    Jim "The Super Saiyan" Logan

    Post  JimLogan54 on Wed Sep 12, 2012 4:00 pm

    Name: Jim Logan
    Ring Name: Jim Logan
    Nick Name (optional): "The Super Saiyan"
    Hometown: Chicago, Illinois
    Height: 6
    Weight: 240

    Finishing Move: "Logan Stunner" - A stunner.

    (Secondary) Finishing Move: "LoganLock" - Kimura lock

    Entrance:"Infected" by 12 Stones.

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    Bio(brief):Jim joined a branch of WWE called HCW and spent two years as a crowd favorite, before turning heel forming the nWo with former tag team partner and real-life friend Wade Barrett.

    Style:High Flyer, and usually goes for submission moves.


    Alignment:Tweener.; He is an incredibly popular wrestler, but his antics and attitude are that of a heel.


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    Re: Jim "The Super Saiyan" Logan

    Post  Mr. McMahon on Thu Sep 13, 2012 2:40 pm

    I'm not sure I can go with this. There's definitely gonna need to be a few changes made; the whole former Champion thing and whatnot just seems way too unrealistic and would automatically put him above everyone else. I'm thinking if there was more of a toned-down gimmick it would be a lot easier to work with.
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    Re: Jim "The Super Saiyan" Logan

    Post  JimLogan54 on Thu Sep 13, 2012 6:09 pm

    Mr. McMahon wrote:I'm not sure I can go with this. There's definitely gonna need to be a few changes made; the whole former Champion thing and whatnot just seems way too unrealistic and would automatically put him above everyone else. I'm thinking if there was more of a toned-down gimmick it would be a lot easier to work with.

    Toned down gimmick? I am not trying to sound stupid or anything, but what do you mean? The Tweener role?
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    Re: Jim "The Super Saiyan" Logan

    Post  Mr. McMahon on Thu Sep 13, 2012 6:47 pm

    JimLogan54 wrote:
    Mr. McMahon wrote:I'm not sure I can go with this. There's definitely gonna need to be a few changes made; the whole former Champion thing and whatnot just seems way too unrealistic and would automatically put him above everyone else. I'm thinking if there was more of a toned-down gimmick it would be a lot easier to work with.

    Toned down gimmick? I am not trying to sound stupid or anything, but what do you mean? The Tweener role?

    In order to be able to build up characters effectively, I like to start them off on a relatively "even" playing field and build them up in-story as though they were a new character. One of the issues here is the fact that his finishing move is a combination of two iconic finishers, "Stone Cold" Steve Austin's Stunner and Shawn Michaels' Sweet Chin Music, which discredits both superstars at the same time by having him use such a move.

    At the same time, the 'ability' as you described it just seems somewhat obvious. I mean, any superstar would technically be able to see a move and then use it, not that they all would, but I'm just aiming to keep it as realistic as possible.

    By saying that he's a former WWE and WCW Champion, bringing him in I'd have to have him already established as such and that takes away at lot of the realistic description that would otherwise be there.
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    Re: Jim "The Super Saiyan" Logan

    Post  JimLogan54 on Thu Sep 13, 2012 8:33 pm

    Mr. McMahon wrote:
    JimLogan54 wrote:
    Mr. McMahon wrote:I'm not sure I can go with this. There's definitely gonna need to be a few changes made; the whole former Champion thing and whatnot just seems way too unrealistic and would automatically put him above everyone else. I'm thinking if there was more of a toned-down gimmick it would be a lot easier to work with.

    Toned down gimmick? I am not trying to sound stupid or anything, but what do you mean? The Tweener role?

    In order to be able to build up characters effectively, I like to start them off on a relatively "even" playing field and build them up in-story as though they were a new character. One of the issues here is the fact that his finishing move is a combination of two iconic finishers, "Stone Cold" Steve Austin's Stunner and Shawn Michaels' Sweet Chin Music, which discredits both superstars at the same time by having him use such a move.

    At the same time, the 'ability' as you described it just seems somewhat obvious. I mean, any superstar would technically be able to see a move and then use it, not that they all would, but I'm just aiming to keep it as realistic as possible.

    By saying that he's a former WWE and WCW Champion, bringing him in I'd have to have him already established as such and that takes away at lot of the realistic description that would otherwise be there.

    I took down the championship history thing . .. . I shall take the other stuff down.
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    Re: Jim "The Super Saiyan" Logan

    Post  Mr. McMahon on Tue Sep 18, 2012 11:30 pm

    Then you are good to go. Very Happy
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    Re: Jim "The Super Saiyan" Logan

    Post  JimLogan54 on Tue Sep 18, 2012 11:36 pm

    Mr. McMahon wrote:Then you are good to go. Very Happy
    Yay! bounce

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